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Nice. I like the contrast between the first in descriptive terms, yet still with the alternating actions/thoughts, and the second all in dialogue (fitting the title so aptly.) I actually assumed the first one was from Xander POV until I got to the second - very nice set-up.
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Date: 2006-12-26 07:05 pm (UTC)Nice. I like the contrast between the first in descriptive terms, yet still with the alternating actions/thoughts, and the second all in dialogue (fitting the title so aptly.) I actually assumed the first one was from Xander POV until I got to the second - very nice set-up.