Title: Taste of Power
Author: bitchygrrl
Fandom: The Island
Pairing: Tom Lincoln/ Lincoln Six-Echo
Rating: PG / NC-17 questionable consent.
Disclaimer: Michael Bay should give them to me as an apology for Pearl Harbor.
Summary: Lincoln gets a taste of power. There are two versions the 100 word is PG. The 200 word is NC-17. I couldn’t decide.
Notes: I think Lincoln showed signs of having a dark side. Let’s explore. Lincoln and Tom are alone when they get into their big fight.

Taste of Power (100 words)
Lincoln looks down at Tom. His sponsor is kneeling in the dirt looking up at him, fear in his eyes. He presses the gun against Tom’s temple. He feels a rush of adrenaline, and something else he can’t name, when Tom flinches.
“Please.” Tom begs.
“How bad do you want to live, Tom?” Lincoln asks. Instinctively he knows this is about more than just survival.
“I’ll do anything.” Tom is shaking.
“Anything?” Something buried deep in the clone’s mind knows where this is leading.
“Show me.” Lincoln looks at Tom and licks his lips.
He likes the taste of power.

Taste of Power (200 words)
Lincoln looks down at Tom. His sponsor is kneeling in the dirt looking up at him, fear in his eyes. He presses the gun against Tom’s temple. He feels a rush of adrenaline, and something else he can’t name, when Tom flinches.
“Please.” Tom begs.
“How bad do you want to live, Tom?” Lincoln asks. Instinctively he knows this is about more than just survival.
“I’ll do anything.” Tom is shaking.
“Anything?” Something buried deep in the clone’s mind knows where this is leading.
“Show me.” He doesn’t know what Tom is going to do, but he wants to find out. He watches as Tom raises trembling hands to his fly.
Tom hesitates for a moment, disgusted with himself, but there is a gun at his head and he wants to see tomorrow. He takes Lincoln’s cock in his mouth, and works it expertly. Lincoln’s hand is on his head holding him in place. Tom has no choice but to swallow when he comes. Then Lincoln yanks him to his feet. He pulls Tom against him pressing their lips together before pushing his sponsor against the car.
Lincoln looks at Tom and licks his lips.
He likes the taste of power.

From: [identity profile] rayne-y-daze.livejournal.com


These are both great - my vote, though, is for the first one. It just seems a little tighter - really makes those last two lines grab you. Still haven't seen the movie, but I'm loving these entries! :-)

From: [identity profile] zinnydark.livejournal.com


I was actually thinking of Tom/Lincoln for this... but couldn't think of a way to do it that didn't go all dark, which I didn't want to do...

Love them both. Maybe the second one a teeeesie bit more, but only because of the kiss at the end. :D

From: [identity profile] a-phoenixdragon.livejournal.com


Oh! they are both so good...but, I'd have to go with the first one - leaves alot to the imagination - and the imagination can be a wonderful and scary thing!
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