FIC: "It Hurts" (100 words, "S.W.A.T.")

[brn-gamble.livejournal.com]

Hey? You know, I LOVE this community! I really do! I continue to find drabbles such a wonderful form of writing. Plus there's something both relaxing and challenging about playing around and tweaking until you can get a drabble to just the right amount of words. Not to mention that I feel so accomplished when I finally manage to post a drabble at a community!

No, I really didn't plan to go 'angsty S.W.A.T.' yet again, but what can I say? This topic just screamed for it! LOL. (I actually wrote a "King Arthur" drabble recently and had thought I might write that. So much for good intentions... ROFL.)

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Title: "It Hurts" (100 words)
Author: Brian Gamble (brn_gamble)
Email address: brn_gamble_at_yahoo.com (brn_gamble@yahoo.com)
Feedback: Appreciated.
Fandom: "S.W.A.T." (the 2003 movie)
Pairing: Brian Gamble/Jim Street (as portrayed by Jeremy Renner and Colin Farrell)



Title: "It Hurts" (100 words)
Author: Brian Gamble (brn_gamble)
Email address: brn_gamble_at_yahoo.com (brn_gamble@yahoo.com)
Feedback: Appreciated.
Fandom: "S.W.A.T." (the 2003 movie)
Pairing: Brian Gamble/Jim Street (as portrayed by Jeremy Renner and Colin Farrell)
Date: September 9, 2005
Archive: GAMBLE-STREET
Disclaimer: Whether RP (real people) or characters, this is totally based on my own daydreams and fantasies. I don't claim to own anything, nor do I profit from writing and sharing fanfic.
Beta: None.
Warnings: Slash (male/male).
Author notes: Written for the 'It Hurts' challenge at the wonderful slashthedrabble

~It Hurts~

Brian Gamble strode angrily away, leaving behind a stunned Jim Street. The brief conflict had managed to abruptly end both their partnership and friendship.

Shards of glass fell from Street's hair as he shut his locker. By rights he could have left, but he'd said he was staying; he'd stick out the final hours of his work day.

Numb from the confrontation, Street didn't bother reaching up to finger his throbbing head where Gamble had smashed him into the mirror.

"Jeez, what's wrong, Street?" he heard McCabe ask.

"It hurts," Street replied. But he wasn't referring to his bleeding scalp...

~the end~

Comments

[nevcolleil.livejournal.com]

Well done :)

[rayne-y-daze.livejournal.com]

Every week, I wait for my fix of SWAT, and I'm never disappointed when it comes. This is so wonderful - angsty, yes, but the prompt and the scene demand it. Gorgeous, as always!

[just-jimbo.livejournal.com]

Can't believe you beat me to the punch! Way to go.

Really nice job. I liked it a lot!

[a-phoenixdragon.livejournal.com]

What a yummy! This was great - and just enough to leave ya wanting more! Kudos and kisses, hon!

[darkhavens.livejournal.com]

I love that feeling of accomplishment too. It's addictive. ;)

One day I'm going to have to see this film. You keep tempting me with these drabbles. *g*

[ex-koisunset365.livejournal.com]

Loved it!!!

[bitchygrrl.livejournal.com]

Aww. Angsty goodness.

[mistressmarilyn.livejournal.com]

Great job! And a cameo appearance from TJ! woohoo!

[fatjoey.livejournal.com]

That was so good, it hurt! Way to go, man.

Even a bad headache and a bloody scalp would not get Street to go home. That guy is a fanatic. (Sound like anyone we know?)

[samsara-sv.livejournal.com]

*hugs you*

even when I have no time to write this comm always provides me with stuff to read where I know there'll be quality in bite-sized (i.e. tea break sized) pieces!